November 27, 2013

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Bags

Heavy packs on backs

slow even the strongest man

seeking paradise

Haiku Catchoo! 2/5

http://dailypost.wordpress.com/2013/11/25/challenge-haiku/

Tags: 5-7-5, backpack, baggage, DPchallenge, haiku, life

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13 responses to “Bags”

Brenda says : November 27, 2013 at 1:59 am
Hmm, like a ripple on a pond, this one hit me slowly. I like it.

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- tanhaiku says : November 27, 2013 at 1:19 pm
  Thanks Brenda!
  
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darkcirclesetc says : November 27, 2013 at 3:21 pm
Brilliant simplicity here.

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- tanhaiku says : November 27, 2013 at 6:56 pm
  cheers!
  
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