slowly the water
envelopes antique beauty
even the fish flee
Tags: 5-7-5, fish, haiku, travel, venice, water
You have a real way with language. I’ve enjoyed visiting and doing a haiku dance. 🙂
Thanks Brenda, much appreciated. I’ve been inspired after reading some of your great haikus, and that’s my favourite type of dance! Happy thanksgiving!
Why thank you, such a nice thought to be an inspiration to another person with talent. Hope your Thanksgiving has been great!
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