Bags

Heavy packs on backs

slow even the strongest man

seeking paradise

 

Haiku Catchoo! 2/5

http://dailypost.wordpress.com/2013/11/25/challenge-haiku/

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13 responses to “Bags”

  1. Brenda says :

    Hmm, like a ripple on a pond, this one hit me slowly. I like it.

  2. darkcirclesetc says :

    Brilliant simplicity here.

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